This is yet another post about the YA horror novel I’ve been working on, which I roughly outlined here. Last time I gave you the very beginning of the story (which I’ve already altered again); this time I’m going to give you the very end of the story. This ending will undergo further changes: I already know that I need to decide whether it makes sense to have italicized thoughts-of-the-moment within the narrative, and if I like them, decide how to alter other story sections to incorporate them holistically rather than as a last minute deal.
Here’s the action climax:
