Belated Flash Fiction: 5 Sentences

I missed my post for Friday, but I have it here for you anyway.  Chuck Wendig’s Flash Fic challenge for the week was a five sentence story, laid out in this fashion:

Sentence 1: Beginning / Inciting Incident

Sentence 2: Middle

Sentence 3: Middle peak, act turn or pivot

Sentence 4: Climactic turn or twist

Sentence 5: Resolution

Also, it isn’t supposed to be more than 100 words.  Here’s my schoolwork-addled attempt.


There’s blood pooling on the floor.

It drips from my hands.

I’m so sorry.

I should have been more careful with the transfusion bag.  I’ll just … go get a mop.


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